[identity profile] elizabeg.livejournal.com 2005-06-18 07:54 am (UTC)(link)
I like that formulation much.

And this, this is the flash point in itself--the curve of her the place where desert heat breaks wide. She knows it so.

[identity profile] cbertsch.livejournal.com 2005-06-18 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
"The curve of her the place where desert heat breaks wide. She knows it so." Wow. That's pretty awesome.